Whenever I write something it somehow turns out to be in second person in present tense.... So here's what I wrote this morning:
You look up into the dark purple
sky. Not a single light can be seen. Not a single sound can be heard. Out of
the silence the sudden waves of a cold wind come out. They start slapping your cheeks,
tangling your neatly braided hair. You realise that you can’t cover yourself
with anything. Your feet are numb and frozen. Your arms are covered with goose
bumps. Your backpack seems heavier with every step you make.
You stop and stare into the darkness
of the forest in front of you. Suddenly, you can see a light. Hidden in the bushes
and the tall trees it flickers as if telling you to come closer. Not thinking
about the next step, you hurry to the light. As you come closer you realise that
it is not a fire or a lamp. The light glows and flickers in the light shades of
purple. You stop. The light is about a metre away from you. Thoughts fill your
mind. Could this place be safe? Should you trust the beautiful light?
The questions cannot be answered for
there’s a figure in front of you. It is too late to turn back. It is too late
to think over what you have done. You stand there, frozen, as the dark figure comes closer and closer.
You see a girl, just like you,
examining you with her curious eyes. There’s something unusual about her. She
doesn’t seem human. She’s wearing a green, strangely textured dress and no
shoes. Her eyes are deep and large. Her hair is neither curly nor straight. It
is multicoloured and... It glows in the dark.
It takes you a moment to understand
what is going on.
The two of you are standing in the
dark forest studying each other with eyes large of astonishment. She puts her
hand on your shoulder, as if testing if you’re real, and turns her head
slightly. You touch her hand.
Moments after moments, you just stand
there holding each other’s hands. Afraid to breath or move.
The girl is the first one to break
the silence.
“Who are you?” she asks.
You don’t know how to exactly answer
her question. Is she asking you for your name? Is she trying to figure out
where you’re from? You decide not to say anything, but ask her another
question.
“What’s your name?”
“My name?” the girl says.
“Yes,” you reply, “your name?”
“My name?”
It seemed like both of you were
talking in absolutely different languages. Simple things that were normal to
you were hard to understand for her. You decide to rephrase the question.
“What do people call you here?”
“There are no people here,” is the
answer.
You think about what she has said,
trying to bring meaning to her words.
“Sit down,” she tells you. “And tell
me about your world.”
She takes your hand and forces you
to the ground.
The light still glows.
“There are no people....” you
whisper quietly, not able to form a proper question or sentence.
“You look so lost. What’s the
matter?” The girl takes your hand. “Are you hungry? Do you want some fruit?”
You realise that you are quite
hungry indeed and reply, “Thanks! I brought some food with me.”
You open your backpack, take out an
orange and put it on the ground. The girl stares at it as if never seen
anything like that before.
“Do you want some?” you ask
politely.
Without saying anything the girl
takes the orange and examines it. “Is it edible?” she asks.
You nod, thinking how strange it is
that she doesn’t know what oranges are.
The girl bites the orange, without
peeling it and says in disgust, “I don’t think I like it.”
“You have to peel it first,” you
explain and take the orange from her. You see that the marks she left on the
orange are very unusual. It doesn’t look like it has been bitten by human
teeth.
Having peeled the orange you give it
back to the girl. She devours it quickly.
“I never had anything like this
before!” she exclaims. “It’s sweet, but kind of sour too. Where did you get it
from?”
You’re not so sure what to say. Does
she mean the name of the shop you got the orange from? You decide to say, “This
one store near my house.”
The girl looks at you with
misunderstanding. You get a feeling that she didn’t understand anything of what
you have said.
“Never mind then,” you mumble.
You take out another orange and give
it to her. She peels it carefully like a little child and gives a half of it to
you.
“Where did you come from?” she asks.
Again, her question seems strange to you. She didn’t ask “Where do you come
from” or “Where are you from”. The way she phrased it is very odd.
Before you could open your mouth she
suddenly decided to answer the question herself. “I know where you came from!”
she exclaimed. “You’re from Nafricia!”
You think it is better to go along
with it and nod.
“I heard that people from Nafricia
are very nice people!” she continued. “And that they have strange textured hair
and coloured eyes like you!”
“You have coloured eyes too, do you,”
you ask her, still not quite sure what she is on about.
“Yes, but they change colour,” she
answered. After a long pause the girl asks another strange question. “Can I
touch your hair?”
You are surprised, but seeing nothing
wrong with it, you unbraid your hair and say “yes”.
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